1 楼： 13852316118
It's a fine day today,but my mood isn't sunny.I feel so tired today. I don't know whether today is a busy weekend or i have been caught a cold or the bother reined. Actually ,i feel very bad today. I want to somebody can care for me at this time .Luckily my workmates are very kindful,but they are not what i need mostly. Today i am very sad .I don't know what he think of .Are the reins and the career not get together? I don't know that how long will i insist in?
It is so late ,i must sleep .Good night...go on tomorrow ~
Goood morning ~Today is a fine day,too .After i have been fell asleep.I think of more.i feel i grow up in a night.i will be alive for myself .Don't baffle others and swink myself. I belive as long as i work hard to face. The life will not be devilishness. i will happy everyday.
2 楼： xyt1995
1、鈀 my mood isn't sunny改爲I'm in a bad mood
3 楼： bevinvane
坦白說，語法錯誤很多。
「I don't know weather today is a busy weeken or i have caught a cold or the bother reins.」如果我理解沒有錯的話，應該是，
「I don't know what causes my bad mood,the weather,caughting a cold or something else.」
「I very want somebody can care for me at this time」這是中文講法 應該說「I desire that somebody can take care for me at this time.」
「Luckly my workmates they are very kind 」單詞拼錯了，文法也不對。應該說 「luckily,my workmates are very kind.」
下面還有許多句子，我不理解是什麼意思，所以沒有辦法幫你。